Teacher: Phil Coogan
Adapted from English Online Unit
Adaptions for ESOL Students: Jenni Bedford, Margaret Kitchen and Breda Matthews
Year: 10 Level: 4-6 |
Duration: 3 weeks |
Achievement objective being assessed English:
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Learning outcomes Students will:
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Supporting achievement objective English:
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Learning outcomes Students will:
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Processes Exploring Written Language:
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Language learning focus Students will:
How the language learning outcomes will be achieved:
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Students will develop a piece of writing describing their memory of a journey they have taken.
Conditions
This activity should be worked on in the classroom under teacher supervision to ensure authenticity. Teachers may guide students actively through the initial exercise helping them to identify techniques mentioned. Teachers may show how the techniques used in the exemplars can be applied to students' own writing.
Between drafts, teachers can advise students that their writing may need further work on ideas, language, structure or accuracy in spelling, punctuation or paragraphing but not correct errors. Students should have access to dictionaries to check their writing. Word processing is acceptable providing it is done under teacher supervision.
Resources provided linked to the unit plan: thematic unit, planning chart (Word 43KB) , content card (Word 43KB) , Stylistic Suggestions (Word 31KB) , Structure (Word 34KB) , Characterisation (Word 47KB) , exemplars of student work ( Writing for Publication Exemplar A not achieved (RTF 12KB) , Writing for Publication B (RTF 19KB) , Writing for Publication C (RTF 15KB) , Writing for Publication Exemplar D (RTF 11KB) ), Assessment schedule (Word 50KB) (as indicated in the unit plan)
Student Instructions
In this activity, you will develop a piece of writing of at least 300 words where you describe your memories of a journey you have taken. Your writing will build a picture of your experience for the reader suitable for publication in a class magazine.
Before you begin writing, you will look at exemplars of student writing and focus on techniques you could use to develop your own writing effectively.
You will be assessed on
Select and adapt these learning activities to best meet the needs of your students, and to fit the time available:
Learning task 1: Reading about journeys
Learning task 2: Developing ideas
Learning task 3: Reading about one student's journey
Learning task 4: Drafting a piece about your journey
See the assessment schedule which is also linked to the exemplars.
English Exemplar Project: Personal Experience Writing levels 1-5
This unit highlighted the need to focus on:
Published on: 09 Jan 2018