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About this site

English Online is a site for primary and secondary English teachers in New Zealand and internationally. ESOL Online and Literacy Online are sister sites. 

For further information on this site email Catriona Pene at  [email protected]

The principles that underpin the sites:

  • All learners can achieve.
  • Content and pedagogical knowledge is essential for effective instruction.
  • Knowledge of students’ progressions is critical to meeting students’ diverse needs.
  • Students need responsive and personalised instruction.
  • Teaching decisions should be based on evidence of students’ strengths and needs.
  • Teaching and learning sequence tasks need to have a clearly defined pedagogical rationale.
  • Teachers’ ongoing inquiry into the impact of their teaching decisions is essential for providing effective differentiated instruction.
  • Ongoing inquiry into underachievement is a key to schooling improvement.
  • Practice is informed by contemporary research and thinking.

How did English Online begin?

English Online was originally part of an ongoing English professional development contract between Unitec NZ and the New Zealand Ministry of Education. In 1998 and 1999, it involved 100 primary and secondary schools per year. Each school nominated a lead teacher who undertook an internet tutorial, and then developed a unit of learning that was posted on the site as a permanent resource for New Zealand (and international) English teachers.

Teaching as inquiry

 

Teaching as Inquiry flow diagram.

Teaching as inquiry

Since any teaching strategy works differently in different contexts for different students, effective pedagogy requires that teachers inquire into the impact of their teaching on their students.

Inquiry into the teaching–learning relationship can be visualised as a cyclical process that goes on moment by moment (as teaching takes place), day by day, and over the longer term. In this process, the teacher asks:

Learning about my students' needs

What is important (and therefore worth spending time on), given where my students are at? This focusing inquiry establishes a baseline and a direction. The teacher uses all available information to determine what their students have already learned and what they need to learn next.

Planning for my students' needs 

What strategies (evidence-based) are most likely to help my students learn this? In this teaching inquiry, the teacher uses evidence from research and from their own past practice and that of colleagues to plan teaching and learning opportunities aimed at achieving the outcomes prioritised in the focusing inquiry.

Impact of changed practices

What happened as a result of the teaching, and what are the implications for future teaching? In this learning inquiry, the teacher investigates the success of the teaching in terms of the prioritised outcomes, using a range of assessment approaches. They do this both while learning activities are in progress and also as longer-term sequences or units of work come to an end. They then analyse and interpret the information to consider what they should do next.

The New Zealand Curriculum, p. 35.

Reports

Purpose

The purpose of a report is to describe and classify information. Reports have a logical sequence of facts that are stated without any personal involvement from the writer.

Informative reports are written about living things like plants and animals and non-living things like cars or oceans. An information report is used when we talk and write about, eg. Bikes. (When writing a description we only talk/write about one specific thing, eg. My Bike).

Structure

Reports usually consist of the following:

  • an opening statement. (The Antarctic is a large continent at the South Pole; Possums are nocturnal animals that were introduced to New Zealand from Australia.)
  • a series of facts about various aspects of the subject eg where possums live, what they eat, problems they cause, etc. These facts are grouped into paragraphs and each paragraph has a topic sentence.
  • diagrams, photographs, illustrations and maps may be used to enhance the text
  • reports don't usually have an "ending", although sometimes the detailed information is rounded off by some general statement about the topic.

Language

  • Nouns and noun phrases are used rather than personal pronouns. The use of personal pronouns is limited.
  • Most reports are written in the present tense.
  • Some reports use technical or scientific terms.
  • Linking verbs are used, eg. is, are, has, have, belong to, to give coherence.
  • Uses some action verbs (climb, eat).
  • Descriptive language is used that is factual rather than imaginative eg colour, shape, size, body parts, habits, behaviours, functions, uses.

e-Learning tools to support report writing

Online thesaurus:

Brainstorming tools:

Poems, Poems, Everywhere

Teacher Jo Morris, Sarah Bullock

 

 Year

 Level

 Duration

9-10 3-5 3-4 weeks

 

Achievement Objective Being Assessed

Learning Outcomes

Poetic Writing  Write a variety of poems, and choose at least one for re-writing and editing to publication standard.

Processes

 Exploring language  
 Thinking critically  

Supporting Achievement Objective

Learning Outcomes

 Personal Reading  Read poems for pleasure.
 Close Reading  Read a poem closely for meaning and form.
 Presenting  Present a poem as a part of a group to the class.

 NCEA Link

 Assessment:

 Formative

 Achievement Standard:

 AS90052 (English 1.1): Produce Creative Writing.

 

Teacher background reading

Teaching and learning activities

Select and adapt these learning activities to best meet the needs of your students, and to fit the time available:

Learning task 1

Learning task 2

Learning task 3

Learning task 4

Learning task 5

Learning task 6

Links for Students

Collaborative online projects

Poetry Express

Assessment

  • Final copy of poem of choice assessed against Poetic Writing strand in Curriculum.
  • Peer Assessment Opportunities: Constuctive thoughts on draft and finished poems, evaluation of members of group in group work, evaluation of group presentation of movement poem.

assessment (RTF 9KB)

Resources

Electronic

Print

  • Manhire, Bill. Mutes and Earthquakes
  • Scott, Denise and Kitchen, David. Involved in Poetry. Heinemann
  • Michael & Peter Benton. Examining Poetry. Hodder & Stoughton
  • Eshuys & Guest. The Power of Poetry. Universal Publishing
  • Marsden, John. Everything I know about Writing. Mandarin
  • English in Aoteoroa May 1998

Follow up

This unit sits alongside close reading and critical appraisal of poems by others (particularly poets with an established critical reputation), with a focus on language, imagery and structure. It would be possible to intersperse the more formal close reading activities with their own creative work.

Learning task 2: Group experience

Context: Writing a poem individually, using a group experience and ideas

Teacher provides students with stimuli, such as a walk, run, shout, play, lie in the grass).

Students brainstorm words to describe the experience (verbs, adjectives, adverbs, nouns).

Students use the words from the brainstorm to create a poem. The focus is on putting the words together to create word pictures.

Students can, if they wish, develop these word-collection poems using more of their own ideas and creativity.
 

Students shape their poems into a form of their choice to share the feelings and images associated with the poem. First drafts are discussed in pairs and groups, edited and re-worked.

Extension

Students draw on the same recollection to write a short feature or letter to inform their audience or set out a point of view that arises from the experience. The focus is on the differences in language use for different purposes.




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